Feedback: My Contents Page

My lecturer also marked my contents page and gave me a grade for it, this isnt my overall grade, but just a basic idea of the grade I am working at. Here are the feedback sheets below:

I had more to change on my contents page, including the size of the signature on my editors note, size of columns and also making the image of my model at the top of the page smaller so the top of her head wasn't cut off the page. I also had some punctuation to correct in my editors note which was basic stuff like commas and capital letters that I'd missed out.

Here below is my newly corrected contents page!